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Crtique please

Replies: 11 — Last Post Aug. 20 9:36am by starrynight401

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( starrynight401 )

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Some suggestions please? And critiques. The one area that really bothers me is the white set of little flowers they aren't quite burned in enough they are too stark white...

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hadouken

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yea, i agree, the contrast is a bit off, but this is still pretty cool

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It's nice, but it's not really sharp, even in the foreground.

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tropicalbreezze2

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I'm a photographer too :)

Umm I like the whole concept and the fact that you caught a hummingbird is amazing! But I think that they humming bird is a little blurry and out of focus even though he is supposed to be the focal point and centerpiece of the picture. Also I agree with your own critique that the white flowers at the top are too stark white

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It should be sharper, I think.

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What camera are you using?

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Its good, but more sharpness.

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try using a macro lense

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( starrynight401 )

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It's a canon film slr and yeah the the hummingbird moth became blurry because I didn't have the speed high enough because I just caught him before he flew away so I didn't have time to adjust my settings.

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crop the white photos out. they look like there was a fluffy on your lens

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awesome

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Quote: from tropicalbreezze2 at 9:19 am on Aug. 20, 2008

try using a macro lense

Oh I wish I just can't afford one just yet.

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